Uhhhhh
Its interesting, I'll give it that. But thevocals were just a bit off beat and off key. And for the lyrics i could actually understand, weren't really that good. The techno trcak behind it was pretty basic, nothing really stood out or pulled me in. And the song really needs a proper ending. A little more work on the technical side of this song, more balance, and better lyrics, and it could be improved. And perhaps not singing in momotone. Its an idea but didn't survive execution.
Well, I think the lyrics were good... Obviously, it wasn't sung very well. So, I didn't expect good ratings from it on that point.
Best song i heard all day!
Yeah, sorry, just had to do that. I'll be good and go listen to the song proper now.
lol, i will never hear the end of this :P
Thanks for the review, lol
Sounds more like House techno in a wind tunnel
I have several song sthat haven't been reviewed yet, but I just assumed thats because they suck. Well, not sure if its technically a feasable thing to do, resubmitting and all, but you are right, this track does deserve some attention. Actually i'm glad to hear a song of yours that wasn't done in by a small flaw. Though the drum roll in the background seems a bit out of place to me, the rest of the song works very well. Just as much as I like it, when it comes down to it there isn't much to it. The synths are great, but get lost in the beat. But I must admit it is very well done, it just doesn't get me all that excited eithier.
Thanks for the review, im glad you liked it somewhat. Its one of my darker songs. if you want a trance listen to the striker, or radiate.
Well, first of all...
Switch this review with the one I did of Armageddon. I accidently put the review for this song on that review, and vice versa.
As for Armageddon, the song this review is for cause i'm an idiot who can't br bothered to look before clicking, its technically really good. Love the chaotic beats and piano synths in it. Reminds me of a crazy factory where a pianist has invaded. Just that fade out in the middle of the song was jarring. Actually wasn't really a fade, it just stopped then faded back in. Would have been better without it. The guitar synths were a great ender though. The song comes off as being very powerful. Everything had its place almost. Good beat and drums. Just take out that fade, that kept this song from really connecting with me. Its like this and the other track i reviewed are great, but they have certain flaws that hold them back. Which sucks cause your style is really good. Oh well, still good, but not great like it could be.
its amazing how one of the shittiest songs ive made gets more feedback than the best ones if made, now like 30 ppl think i suck ass and prolly wont even chek out my new stuff......
Its got an interesting rhythm
But the loop could be smoother. That bass is really heavy. Scared the crap out of my cats, and they like to sleep on my subwoofer, and most of the time don't really mind it when I'm playing music. Not this time. Now if it were only a full song and not just a loop. At least you could chop off the beginning melody without the drums and bass, and this ould make a fine loop. However, it stopping every 15 seconds to start at the beginning notes throws it off. I really wanted to give this a higher score, cause its got lots of originality in it, and would be a perfect loop, if it just went on with the beat proper. Thats my only irk with it. At least give this the proper song treatment! It deserves it, and it sounds great, just the thing i've mentioned many times is holding it back.
LOL thats funny.
finally somone who appreciates bass lol.
it wasnt a real good song, jus a test
(for those of u who are reading this, he was reviewing PaNdOrA-sumptin...
not this song lol)
Uh....
Well, sampling Gorillaz was an interesting turn. The rap was a bit sloppy, and sounded heavily compressed. And it was just a bit too slow. But the lyrics were fairly good, for what wasn't completely muddled. Just improve the quality, rap a little faster, or don't slow down the track, and maybe get your own beats, and it could be better.
Preciate ya, down south we call it screwed up....which refers to the slowed up beat and lyrics. All that was on purpose. thanx for the response slaya
Good loop
As far as remakes go, this one is a bit too similar to the original of my tastes. But it does offer some differences, mainly the melody is a different piano synth. Okay, so there really isn't that much different. Actually thats what gets me about it. Its done really well and I see that you know your way around your programs, but it doesn't offer any real improvements or differences over the original track. Not bad as it is, just somewhat pointless in execution.
ok, some improvements=heavier bass, stronger drums. not achievable on a SNES. but i see your point, youd like to have heard a development on top of the original, not just an imitation.I also see that for the use of a flash, someone might prefer to just sample the game music, as it is often done, here on NG.my point for executing this piece is to rekindle anyones nostalgic past gaming experiences. LOL! thankyou for a really constructive review.
Its very esoteric
The off beat at the beginning set the tone for the song. This would go perfect with any sort of mind bending scene. Two people fighting while flying in the air, a halucenation, uh, other things. Thats all i can think of right now. The dnb by itself was very good, had a twisted air to it. And the melody that played was distant, but still felt attached to the song. As is the course, it was a little repetitive, but the song itself was different enough so that it didn't matter too much. The only thing is the quality seems a bit low, but oh well. Good work with this track.
Mate thats a great, great review. yeah i know i got this repetition problem, i dont know when to stop mate.i know that if i make it less repetative, the repeat bearability of the tune goes up!, and if i made it shorter, i could increase the quality. i understand your advice well!thank you very much for this review. i love encouragement of this sort.
Its got moments
But it doesn't seem to do enough for me. Got some interesting ideas, but it just doesn't go anywhere. Gets stuck on the breakdown interlude too long. And the porn samples just seem out of place. Plus you stuck them in the background, so many people may not notice the samples. The beat is good, and the accompanying drums sound good. Just a bit too repetitive, and kinda hollow.
your mums hollow.
thanks for your review!
Good at first
But it lost focus in the middle of the track. Would have benefitted if the drum track didn't drop out so long. Or if it changed up once or twice. And the ending came abruptly. Good as an atmosphereic track, but terrible as a techno track. The bass track was alright, but wasn't enough of it. I didn't hate this song, but I thought there was a few places in the song that almost ruined it.
Thanks for your comment! I chose techno cuz i didn't know where else to put it. But i guess you're right.
I'll start with Edge Circle 2 soon, attempting to fix it's errors.
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